I totally see what you were going for here and I think you executed it well, but to speak objectively about this song as I would any other, you may have thrown a bit much reverb at the piece, most specifically the trancey synth you have doing the main motif for most of the song, and overall it seemed a bit repetitive. You positively nailed the "feels" of the song though, which is to say it sounds majestic, triumphant and borderline inspirational. Also, you did a great job with the transitions between sections and your dynamics were well done. If I may offer one more piece of advice, sidechaining the volumes of your pads, or anything realy) to the peaks of your cymbals or any other big hits would go a long way towards making your sound a bit more foreceful. This was a good track, good enough that I would hope I run across your music again.